NO AI. Lean into the deeper thing at hand which is provided in the second article. Make a version of the attached draft where there are more specific examples of art so it's more thorough and comprehensible. Front load the beginning with deep definitions of terms covered like "traditional," etc.  Remove metaphorical phrasing, be specific, use more sources, expand and edit what is vague. Use research papers (within the last 5 years. Also: no britannica, wikipedia, reddit, articles, or anything similar... UNLESS the author is clearly credible and an expert in what they are discussing). Try using the following pieces to help wrap your mind around the definitions:

https://abstracthouse.com/en-us/blogs/inspiration/traditional-art-vs-modern-art-understanding-the-differences#:~:text=Tr... 

https://www.blackcopper.org/articles/art-in-the-age-of-social-media-redefining-creation-consumption-and-power-dynamics