Eudora Welty's "A Worn Path" (This is from the essay you wrote a few days ago) see attachment.
Read at least two of your fellow student’s responses and write some constructive criticism about each response. You are helping them write a better analysis with sufficient support. You can politely suggest corrections to any parts of the analysis except the truth value. You should avoid disagreeing with the truth value as this is a personal opinion and may be a fundamental opinion of the student.
Remember, your responses must be substantial and helpful to receive credit.
First response should be to this post below:
· XXX Protagonist XX XXXXXXX XXXXXXX
· XXX XXXX line: Phoenix XXXXXXXXXXXXX and courage XXXXX her overcome obstacles to XXX XXX XXXXXXXX XXX her sick XXXXXXXX.
· The XXXXX XXXX: Courage, love and determination helps you XX accomplish your goals.
· XXX Truth value: is XXXX.
XXX inciting incident XX XXX story is this XXXXX elderly frail, woman XXXX Phoenix XXXXXXX who XXX very strong XXX determine XX XX on this long journey through the fields and woods to XXX XXXX medication for her XXXX XXXXXXXX. She encountered XXXX obstacles and XXXXXXX a XXX XX XXXX XXX she XXXXX XXXXX. XXX mid-point is when Phoenix XX at gun XXXXX and XXXXXXXX. She XXXXX XXXXXXX XXXXX insults to break her XXXXX. XXX kept a XXXXXXXX XXXXXXXX XXX XXXXX thought XXXXX XXXXX XXXXXX XX. XXX climax XX when Phoenix XXXXXXX XXXXXXX her destination safely XXX got the XXXXXXXXXX XXX her XXXX grandson.
XXX theme line XX Phoenix Jackson XXXXXXXX her long XXX XXXXXXXXX journey to get her grandson’s XXXXXXXXXX safely. She XXXXXXX so XXXX XXXX XXX challenges along XXX XXX. She didn’t XXXXX anyone or XXXXXXXX to XXXX or XXXXXXXXXX her. XXX XXXX’t allow XXXXX caught in XXX bush XX XXXXXX, the XXXX weather, XXX XXXXX, XXX XXXXXX XXXXX XXXXX or XXX gun XXXXXXX in her face to XXXX her. She XXXXX gave XX XXX remained XXXXX. XXX XXX a XXXX brave old woman.
The XXXXX XXXXX XX the XXXXX is XXXX because when you XXXX XXXXXXX and XXXX XXXX and XXXXXX on you that XXXXX you XXX determination and XXXXX you need to XXXXXXXX anything. Phoenix XXXXXXX XXX faced XXXX XXXX obstacles and XXXXXXXXXX XXX XXXXXXX XX XXXX focus and XXXXX until she reached her XXXX.
First response:
XXXXXXX Jackson is a loving and caring XXXXXXXXXXX XXX XXXXX XXX XXX XXXXXXX why she goes in XXXX a XXXX XXX difficult XXXXXXX XXXX XXXX to XXXX. XXX identified the XXX-XXXXX as the moment when XXX XXXXX XXXXXX points the gun on XXXXXXX. I XXXXX that XXX XXXXX-white XXXXXXXX XX a XXXXXXXXX opposition XXXX by XXX XXXXXXXX on XXXXXXX. The white XXXXXX can XX the XXXXXX of a person with good intentions XXX with a bad influence. XX XXXXX words, bad XXXXXXXXX XXX XXXX XXXXXXX XX in good XXXXXXXXXX. XX XXX fast XXX short events XX the mid-point, XXX hunter XXXXX XX XXXXXXXX XXXXXXX XX turn XXXXXX and XXXXXXX XXX XXXX XX XXXXX XXX XXXXX of XXXXX XXX XXX brute XXXXX (XXX XXX). The XXXXX XX self-XXXXXXXXXX goes XXXXXX XXX obstacles XXX challenges.
XXXXXX respose should be XX XXX XXXX below:
• XXXXXXXXXXX-Phoenix XXXXXXX
• Plot XXXX- Phoenix XXXXXXX XXXXXXX a XXXX, XXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXX to XXXX to get some XXXXXXXX XXX her grandson.
• Theme Line- XXX unconditional love for a XXXXX can XXXX you to XXXXXXX even XXX most seemingly impossible XXXXX.
• XXXXX XXXXX- Yes, this XXXXXXXXX XX XXXX.
XXX XXXXX XXXXXX with XXX introduction of an old XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXX Jackson. She is XXXXXX XX XXXXXX many obstacles that XXX XXXXXXXXX to XXXXXXX XX her XXXXXXX. XXX. Jackson XX XXXXXXX through XXX XXXX terrains and XXXX uses logs to cross a creek. XX she XXXXX her way XXXXXXX her XXXXXXX she XXXXX XXXXXXX reality and fantasy, XXX knowing which is real. She XXXXX XXXXXX a hunter XXXX obviously XXXXX at her XX a XXXXX old XXXX XXXX XXXXXX XXX XXXXX XXXXXX the journey XXX is XXXXXX. XXXX XXXXX the XXX XX her journey she is XXXXXXXXXX XX XXX XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXX XXX XXXXXX. The kindness of a stranger is demonstrated when Mrs. Jackson XXXX a complete stranger to help her XXXX XX her shoes. XXXX XXX XXXXXXX the XXX of her journey, which is a XXXXXX’s office, she cannot XXXXXXXX why she is XXXXX. After her XXXXX XXX body XXXX her XXXXXXX the long journey it is her XXXX that XXXXX XX XXXX her in XXX XXX. XXXXX sitting XXX a XXXXXX XXX remembers XXX is in XXXX XXXXX XXX medication for her XXXXXXXX.
This XXXXX XXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXXXXXXXX love XXX a XXXXX has XX limits. XXXXXXXX Mrs. XXXXXXX XX a XXXX XXX XXXX, XXX XX XXXXXXXXX not in the XXXX XX XXXXXX herself, XXX makes the XXXXXXX XX XXXX even XXXXXX it is very challenging. She makes this XXXXXXX because XXXXXXX XXX medication her XXXXXXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX XXX, and he XX XXX XXXX XXXXXX she XXX XXXX. She puts XXXXX her XXXXXXXX, XXX XXXX XXXXXXXX XXX XXXXX XX do make XXXX XXXX her XXXXX has what he needs. XXXX is a XXXXX demonstration of XXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXX giving you the strength to conquer XXXXXXXX.
This XXXXX XX true in everyday life. XXXXX is not a XXX XXXX goes by XXXXX is XXX a story XXXXX some heroic act a XXXXXX or XXXXXX XXX XXXX XX save XXXXX child. Parents XXXXX most XX their life XXXXX whatever it takes XX XXXX their children out XX XXXX’s way, even after XXX child XXX made it adulthood. The XXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXX a XXXXXX XXX for XXXXX child XXX no boundaries.
XXX XXXXX between XXXXXXX XXX fantasy XX a XXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXX XXXX to highlight the XXXXXXXX and XXXXXXXX conflicts XXX challenges Phoenix XXX XX XXXX with. XXX XXXXXXXX conflicts XXX XXXXXX her own XXXX XXX XXXXX her XXXXXXXXXXXX XXXX XX XXXXXXXXXXXXX with her XXXXXX XXX XXXXXX XXX has. Her sense XX reality keeps her XXXXX XXX XXXXXXX XX completing XXX journey. This XXXXX of XXXXXXX appears XXXX XXX talks XXXX the elements of XXXXXX XXXX XXX staying in her way (animals, difficult XXXXXXX) and with XXXXXXXXX characters XXXX the plot. XXX XXXX XX XXXXXXXXXXXXX and she XXXX everything it XXXXX XX XXXX the XXXXXXXXX of her XXXXXXXX. She XXXXX her own XXXXXXX XXX XXXXXXXXX by XXXXXXXX from the hunter, just XX XXXX XXXX she will have the resources XXXXXXXX XX fulfill the journey. Her XXXXX to XXXX XXXX beyond XXX moral XXXXXX XX XXX society XXX is XXXXXX in. In XXX same XXXX, XXX hunter is XXXX a XXXX XXXX he XXXXX Phoenix XXXX he XXXXX’t XXXX a dime XX XXX. XX an XXX, think XXXXX the protagonist’s XXXX. Phoenix XX a mythological XXXX XXXXXX from her own XXXXX.
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