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your presentation is very detailed and professionally presented.  Unfortunately, the presenter notes included in the PPT are not easy to understand. Though this is not a paper, you do need to be attentive to grammar/syntax.  I will allow you to resubmit, if you wish.  I just could not understand the presentation notes.  Words are not in proper sequence.  Please be sure to (1) cite your sources - most slides do not have citations, (2) proofread your work & have someone read it over for content, impact, and understanding, and (3) make sure the PPT slides are explained in the presentation notes - they should flow seamlessly.