your presentation is very detailed and professionally presented. Unfortunately, the presenter notes included in the PPT are not easy to understand. Though this is not a paper, you do need to be attentive to grammar/syntax. I will allow you to resubmit, if you wish. I just could not understand the presentation notes. Words are not in proper sequence. Please be sure to (1) cite your sources - most slides do not have citations, (2) proofread your work & have someone read it over for content, impact, and understanding, and (3) make sure the PPT slides are explained in the presentation notes - they should flow seamlessly.
your presentation is very detailed and professionally presented. Unfortunately, the presenter notes included in the PPT are not easy to understand. Though this is not a paper, you do need to be attentive to grammar/syntax. I will allow you to resubmit, if you wish. I just could not understand the presentation notes. Words are not in proper sequence. Please be sure to (1) cite your sources - most slides do not have citations, (2) proofread your work & have someone read it over for content, impact, and understanding, and (3) make sure the PPT slides are explained in the presentation notes - they should flow seamlessly.